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A girl can’t wear black and be happy
A girl can’t wear bright colors and be sad
A girl who doesn’t follow trends must be a loser
And a girl with no “boyfriend” must be damned  

A boy who treats women right is weak
A boy who beats and bruises them is a real man
A boy who shows emotion is forceless
And only the assholes are left in the end

A boy can’t talk to a girl
Without them being lovers
A girl can’t invite a boy over
Without it being a date
It’s “impossible” for them
To just be friends

A boy can’t love a boy without being sent straight to hell
And a girl can’t love a girl because that’s a sin as well
If you’re not straight
You must be gay
There’s nothing in between in their eyes
But in their eyes you’re all damned anyway

In a perfect world
You could love who you want
And act like yourself
But that perfect world
Is much too far away
EDIT: Thank you all so much for all the faves and comments! :D It really means a lot to me.




Yep, a shitty poem. Enjoy XD Just my thoughts on life ._. I'm a little angry and some people right now, so, yeah.

I didn't mean to offend anyone with this poem, but hate comments will not be tolerated either.









DO NOT USE THIS ARTWORK!!!!!
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NefariousSchemes Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Student General Artist
Soooooo, what happens if your a boy without a girl friend? *Looks through you* Nothing. Oh, that's a relief. No, you are nothing....Oh :,3. Delightful narrative poetry though. I suppose that's what it is. And also the delectably dark undertone of that, but I suppose its just inherent when referring to society. 
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GypsyMountainman Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Professional Writer
Bravo!
Amazing!
Wonderful!
(I say, live your life, let society be damned)
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Pickle-Paws Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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clockworkscar Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
One of the most truthful things I've read all day.  Good job, awesome person. Good job.
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Pickle-Paws Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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FrostyChica Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So much truth. right here.
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Pickle-Paws Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you :D
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sun-lily Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist
You show so much truth in this poem. Great Job!
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Pickle-Paws Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks :D
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sun-lily Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist
You Are Welcome 
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